From the rooftop, we watch the lights in the buildings wink—off for those heading home and on for those coming home. Below our feet, the lights of our respective apartments are on. We are home. At least for the moment. I read the letter in my hands again. The rain that is beginning leaving big wet splotches from fat raindrops on the paper. The message is still clear: It’s a congratulations on admission for you. I didn’t apply anywhere. Never was smart enough for school. Never was smart enough for you. The poetry I wrote I thought would be enough to capture your heart. You taught me that hearts are too big to fit in a cage. blooms are cyclical beautiful temporary in patience returns
A haibun prompt from Frank over at dVerse on going back to school.
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A bittersweet back-to-school moment, eloquently evoked! Great work!
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I love the last few lines. The way the memory fades into an image.
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Nice one. Luv the last line of text preceding the haiku.
Happy Monday
Much❤love
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Cinematic opening; visceral throughout; marvelous haiku close!
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Your haibun evokes mixed feelings.Nice write.
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Well written Tom. For me, the prompt just triggered the current upset and disbelief I am unable to shake.
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Yea I can’t dwell there too long as I’m facing the reality down.
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Poignant…with a sting in that last line. Wonderful haiku.
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Amazing Haibun. I enjoyed last line of the prose and the Haiku. 🙂
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Great title too. 🙂
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very poignant, Tom, and every word felt like it served a purpose.
-David
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I really love it, and how you made the start of school being also about separation and moving away… the raindrops are like tears.
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“blooms are cyclical.”
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