eastern sun drips wet humidity in August lingering at night The California sun in August is hot, but shade provides relief. The sweat of a brow can be cooled by iced lemonade that sustains passions. On the west coast it’s never too hot for passionate kisses. Here I want to stick with you instead of being sticky as a byproduct of the weather. After the sun sets it cools enough for us to make things hotter.
A quick haibun writing prompt on August from Frank over at dVerse.
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Exquisite! I love this line, especially: “Here I want to stick with you instead of being sticky as a byproduct of the weather.” Well-done!
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Ooh, love the wordplay in this. It’s beautiful, sweet, and deliciously sensual. You can feel the warmth and closeness throughout, it really is romantic.
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As someone who has experienced weather too hot to touch another I was trying to capture the counter experience.
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I thought it was Spring when a young man’s fancy turned … but maybe Spring never ended?1 Lovely write.
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It’s always a season for love.
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Very hot – too darn hot, maybe?
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I mean… I don’t know if it’s ever tooooo hot.
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Palm Springs in August is too hot–120 degrees during the day, and cooling to 100 at night. I lived in Redlands for several years and worked in PS. But yes, romance can erupt during a heat wave, or in an igloo.
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Well there better be some heat in the moment in the igloo 😁
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I love it! Keeping it steamy all year long! Great haibun.
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Thank you!
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You are welcome!
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Oh, this is so sexy, TJS ❤
-David
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