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Poem: Revolving Fortunes

a constellation
in night sky counts my fortune
painted in the stars

A haiku response to Word Craft Prose and Poetry ekphrastic prompt for #Tanka Tuesday.

Copyright © 2021 TJS Sherman All rights reserved.


8 thoughts on “Poem: Revolving Fortunes

  1. This senryu is great at how it describes your emotional response to the image. Take the first line and the second line together: that should be one thought. Then, take the second line and the third line together: that should give you the second thought. Senryu focuses on the human, not the world around them; where haiku are nature related. The word “me” makes it more of a senryu than a haiku, almost a hybrid haiku. ❤

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