in the meadow i lay down my head next to yours hair spread out like a red flame h a l o spread through the purple heather fertile i feel our love grow like roots in tert win ed our fingers connected to our hearts b e a t i n g as one on soft earth older than us that has held other lovers time less ly passing on her surface nurturing the smallest weed to the largest r e d w o o d without prejudice i will only hold you for less than a b r e a t h in the time of eons for us though it will be our piece of eternity
A wild Saturday prompt appeared! Something a little different in response to Eugi’s prompt on Meadows.
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The ending is breathtaking, and I love the colors. Fun movement throughout. Really helps the reader stretch and enjoy the words.
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Thank you! I don’t usually play with formatting, but I was inspired to for this poem.
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Love the layout of this and of course your poem is beautifully written as always. Is it easier to make adjustments to the wording now that WP has given us more options? I haven’t played around with the settings yet, so kinda wondering if it’s still tough to do.
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Thank you!
I wrote it in my Google Keep app and then copy and pasted it into the WordPress desktop app and used a preformatted block. So if it looks good on your end I’m guessing it worked 😉 (though I suppose that’s a lot of steps).
I’m doing one tomorrow too, but for that one I did a screen grab and saved it as a picture
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Yeah it really did work and I was viewing it on my IPhone which rarely shows a great layout of anything. So keep doing what you did, it looks great! 😃 The screen shot is probably the easiest. I can’t wait to see it. I’m sorry I couldn’t read all of your posts while I was on vacation. I’ll have to spend some time figuring out what I missed while I was gone.
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I hope you went somewhere nice! I’m going to post my May retrospective on Wednesday to help save you from some of the crap 🤣
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I did! I kinda went all over the place, but ended up in Florida for the majority of my trip. Wednesday’s retrospective will definitely help. 😉
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Oh, my! How lovely you wove and structured your poem. Beautifully rendered.
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Nicely done!
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Wonderful poem, and I really love what you did with the formatting and spacing of words — really drew me further into the work. Very interesting how that works.🌷
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Beautiful lines! i will only hold you
for less than a
b
r
e
a
t
h
in the time of eons
for us though
it will be our piece
of eternity
I loved this in particular. Very clever use of formatting. I loved it 🙂
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