Daylight fades into what would seem to be another night. Sitting in the sand with a half drank bottle of wine between us. I was feeling it so I knew you must be feeling it. I was thinking about kissing you. Back then I didn’t wonder as much about what other people were thinking. It was then you remarked about the full moon hanging on the horizon. You asked if I knew what it was called. I feigned interest and said I have no idea. You told me it was the flower moon, so named because of the wildflowers that bloom in the month of May. Ever smooth, I called you my wildflower as I felt my love for you bloom there in the pale light shimmering on the river. The May flower moon Eclipsed by the Earth’s shadow Floral to blood moon Reflecting deep red Like my heart that pumps for you Waiting for your touch
An attempt at a haibun in response to the d’Verse prompt on the Flower Moon this month.
The form consists of one to a few paragraphs of prose—usually written in the present tense—that evoke an experience and are often non-fictional/autobiographical. They may be preceded or followed by one or more haiku—nature-based, using a seasonal image—that complement without directly repeating what the prose stated.
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The contrast with the blood moon was perfect! Well done.
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Thank you. I’ve been planning on the moon for a while, as I was going to try and do some photography of it, so it was convenient that the challenge lined up with it.
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This is your haibun premier? Bravo, sir! The intimate romance of your prose, complemented by the evocative imagery in your haiku, render your inaugural work with a provocative power. Well done!
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I appreciate your kind words!
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A great haibun. I like the way your incorporated the lunar eclipse into your post.
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I’m looking forward to it, so I happened to have a little extra insight about the upcoming full moon.
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They are always very interesting to see!
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I like the line about calling your girl your wildflower, and the two romantic moon haiku that followed.
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Thank you for the feedback Susan.
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Haibuniliciously delivered. Awesome on-prompt delivery. Salute!
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Haibuniliciously – 😀
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🤣
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I like the romance you’ve conjured up under the flower moon: hard to resist its charms!
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Indeed. I’m hoping the clouds won’t ruin it this year and it can serve as a further muse in person.
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Wonderful prose and excellent double moon haiku Susan!
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Who can resist the may flower moon, and some impromptu words of wooing that should make for smooth sailing? Enjoyed.
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Now if my actual words could be as planned out as my written ones I might have something going for me.
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What a perfect love Haibun (I think that could be a thing, if you can have a love story…)
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Time to offer a theme!
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“floral to blood moon” is such a powerful line in a beautiful haibun. Thank you for sharing
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How sweet to pick up the wildflower… no girl can refrain from being happy after such a compliment.
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A very romantic night and poem!
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