She moves like water Flowing forward fearlessly Falling gracefully Waiting for me to catch her In my arms shaped by her love
A response to Tanaka Tuesday Photo Prompt at Word Craft Poetry. I used the Tanka form following 5-7-5-7-7 syllables.
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How beautiful
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Thank you
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Very nice, beautiful, and I like the alliteration.
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I appreciate you noticing, it was intentional in this poem.
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Lots of trust in here!
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Beautiful poetry.
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This is a magnificent tanka, TJ. The alliteration is spot on! Well done! ❤
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Very romantic. The alliteration of “Fs” is like a bunch of stepping stones before one gets to the flow of water.
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