Coffee in spring is a matter of timing Early in the morning black Where smokey tendrils draw wisps Dancing in the air between us As we share our dreams From the night before With bodies huddled close Against the dark chill of the night In the afternoon coffee hot Becomes a questionable decision The temperature struggling To stand out against mid afternoon heat When we should be inside talking Instead of here midday As business associates would be Discussing the days affairs To while away the day until quitting time There’s no intimacy under harsh light Coffee in the evening is questionable Dictated by the moments before It is poured into cups before us When night temperature is crisp Appropriate for hot beverages Yet late enough to require decisions On if the caffeine is worth it Following a good meal with fullness Of stomachs and hearts That allows us to settle post night cap Or is it served alone and late On nights where sleep won’t come To beds that are empty of lovers Who are having their own drinks Somewhere else under the flower moon So many meaningful considerations Holding the beauty of spring In the many opportunities it presents To make a choice to drink or not Best pondered over that infinite blackness Steaming in my cup
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Good writing ✍🏻
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I appreciate it. My longer form poetry doesn’t seem to get quite the same attention as shorter form responses. I’m wondering if there is something in particular you enjoyed or that caught your attention?
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Just the imagery and the way your describe a certain ritual of the pleasantries of coffee. I can almost smell it. David Lynch would like your post too 😊
As for longer form not getting attention could possibly be due to the fact that there’s so much writing out there that people can’t take in lots of information. I am not much of a reader myself to be honest so I don’t read much either. People think that most writers are avid readers. I am not. I once wrote a tiny poem on WordPress saying: Only writers read what writers write…
This stood out tho and I like coffee words. Well done!
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So true. I get why I see so many haiku poems 🤣
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I don’t do it for the likes or comments or follows. I write for me. And I hope I can make someone laugh or weep 😁
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I write for me, but I’d like to publish at some point, so I use this to try and learn what appeals to people.
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Good man!
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Wow a nice poem on Coffee with a sip in the morning, afternoon, evening and before going to bed. Too good.
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I strive for every action being meaningful.
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That is great Sherman 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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