The love affair of blossoms Begins here in April With rains showers Fertilizing the things held Deep beneath the surface Beginning to grow in yearning They develop reaching out From their lonely slumber Opening arms to the heaven Seeking out hot kisses Of May sun light
Copyright © 2021 TJS Sherman All rights reserved.
Beautiful
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Thank you!
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So utterly beautiful. Loved the first few lines especially!
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I appreciate the kind words and specific feedback.
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Simple, heart-felt and effective… I especially appreciate the way you stay pared down and don’t over-romanticise here..
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I try to only say what needs to be said (how successful I am is hit or miss)
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You have expressed the arrival of Spring beautifully.
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Thank you for your kind words Helen!
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A beautiful poem for Spring!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome!
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I like the “seeking out hot kisses” part.
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No torrid affair is complete without hot kisses.
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Well described. A gem. (I’ve felt that hibernation was lonely too. Then I thought, are we lonely when we slumber? An interesting thought trail.)
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I suppose loneliness in sleep depends on how we dream.
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Excellent work TJS, very well written!
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Thank you Rob!
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Spring captured in word! Well done.
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Captured in word, but was it also captured in your imagination?
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I love the thought of a love affair between spring and the bloom
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I appreciate you kind words Björn
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Some very lovely personifications of nature.
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Thank you very much Mish!
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